Thursday, September 1, 2011

Taken at the Party

She was pretty exhausted. Not from one thing in particular, but you know how it is when you have one of those days. From sun up to sundown - full throttle.

She was never so glad to see her front door.

As she tossed her keys on the counter, she thought she literally heard her bed calling her name. She could think of nothing better.

After a quick shower, she padded down the stairs naked en route to the kitchen. Hearing his key in the door, she let out as audible gasp. “Oh, you scared me.”

He approached her with a slanted smile. He had to admit he enjoyed finding her naked upon his return. Grabbing a handful of her hair, he kissed her. Rough and deep, and far too short in her estimation. The release was just as rough.

"I have a last minute work function. You will accompany me and have exactly 20 minutes to be ready." She opened her mouth to speak but he seemed to vaporize the words in mid air. “It is not optional. There is no argument. I don’t need your approval. However, now, you have only 18 minutes. Would you care to continue this fruitless discussion?”

She knew better than to argue. She hated to be rushed at the last minute, but she was aware his business dictated such. Frantically, she dressed - thankful that she had showered already. Just as he wished, his hand rested on the small of her back while he opened her car door.

Tired as she was, she really tried not to put a damper on the evening. She nodded and smiled at all the appropriate times, to all the appropriate people. He watched her intently as the night went on. Such a good girl. He was annoyed at the last minute intrusion, but the way she tried so hard to make the most of it with nary a complaint, pleased him immensely. In fact, from across the room, he was reminded of how beautiful she was. Admiration was quickly supplanted by lust and he needed to touch her. Now.

“Begging your pardon, I simply must steal this beauty away from you for a moment.” There was a collective smile from all, including her. Leading her from the crowd, he led her into an adjacent room.  No words needed to be spoken. He backed her up against the wall and kissed her hard. Her skirt was quickly yanked down and she stepped out of it just as he pushed her down over the bed. Her heart seemed to stopped beating. What if someone walked in on them? Glancing back at him, she decided against pointing out this detail to him. Besides, she was too busy moaning from the fingers being plunged unceremoniously into her ass. 

When he roughly entered her, she thought she would explode. Then his husky voice cut through the silence… “Every part of you belongs to me to take whenever, wherever I wish."

Just then, she did explode.


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